Question 1:
According to the thesis statement, how many body paragraphs, i.e., the paragraphs that come after the introduction and before the conclusion and develop the main argument, should the essay have?
A: TwoCorrect: The thesis statement outlines the 2 main points, i.e., consumers have the right to know what their food is made of, and many GM foods cause allergies.
B: ThreeIncorrect: Only two main points were outlined in the thesis statement, i.e., consumers have the right to know what their food is made of, and many GM foods cause allergies. Therefore, the essay is supposed to have two body paragraphs.
C: OneIncorrect: Two main points were outlined in the thesis statement, i.e., consumers have the right to know what their food is made of, and many GM foods cause allergies. Therefore, the essay is supposed to have two body paragraphs.
Question 2:
Which of the paragraphs in the essay needs to be supported by some research-based evidence?
A: Paragraph 2Incorrect: This paragraph contains some evidence from other sources.
B: Paragraph 3Correct: This paragraph needs more evidence in the form of examples and statistics.
C: Paragraph 4Incorrect: No evidence is needed in this paragraph. The aim of the conclusion is to restate the central argument and to summarise the key points of the essay.
Question 3:
Which of the three sources has been inaccurately cited in the essay?
A: Beeham (2000)Incorrect: This source has been accurately used in the essay.
B: Carter & Gruere (2003)Incorrect: This source has been accurately used in the essay.
C: MacDonald & Whellams (2007)Correct: The year of publication as cited in-text does not match with the year of publication as given in the references.
Question 4:
How many signposting expressions, e.g., firstly, secondly, thirdly, need to be added in the concluding paragraph to make it more coherent and clear?
A: No signposting expressions should be addedIncorrect: The first main point has been introduced by means of the signposting expression first of all. The writer should have used some more signposting when summarising each of the key points of the essay in order to make the ideas in the concluding paragraph more coherent and clear to the audience. Specifically, they should have used Additionally at the beginning of the 2nd sentence in the conclusion, and Finally at the beginning of the 3rd sentence in the conclusion.
B: One signposting expression should be addedIncorrect: The first main point has been introduced by means of the signposting expression first of all. At least two more signposting expressions should be added in this paragraph. Specifically, the writer should have used Additionally at the beginning of the 2nd sentence in the conclusion, and Finally at the beginning of the 3rd sentence in the conclusion.
C: Two signposting expressions should be addedCorrect: The first main point has been introduced by means of the signposting expression first of all. Two signposting expressions should be added in this paragraph: 1. Additionally, placed at the beginning of the 2nd sentence in the conclusion, and 2. Finally, placed at the beginning of the 3rd sentence in the conclusion.