Question 1:
Identify the thesis statement, i.e., the sentence that states the main idea of the essay.
A: Deforestation has become a controversial issue and is growing at an alarming rateIncorrect: This statement introduces the topic of the essay and highlights the scope of the problem.
B: Even though reducing deforestation is costly and time consuming, it should be lowered to a minimum as it causes loss of biodiversity, impairs human health and contributes to the rise of global warming and soil erosionCorrect: This is the thesis statement. It outlines the three main points of the essay to be developed.
C: Deforestation has its side effects on almost everything, but most importantly are influences on human health, climate, and biodiversityIncorrect: The thesis statement normally appears at the end of the introduction. This sentence, however, appears in the conclusion. Thus, it is not the thesis statement, but a restatement of the main points developed in the essay.
Question 2:
Which of the sources cited in the first body paragraph of the essay need to be included in the References?
A: Only Ferrraz et al. (2007)Incorrect: This is the original source which was cited by Sehgal (2009). The writer found the citation by Ferraz et al. (2007) in Sehgal (2009). Therefore, only Sehgal (2009) needs to appear in the References at the end of the essay.
B: Only Sehgal (2009)Correct: The writer found the citation by Ferraz et al. (2007) in Sehgal (2009). Therefore, only Sehgal (2009) needs to appear in the References at the end of the essay.
C: Both Ferraz et al. (2007) and Sehgal (2009)Incorrect: Ferraz et al. (2007) is the original source which was cited by Sehgal (2009). The writer found the citation by Ferraz et al. (2007) in Sehgal (2009). Therefore, only Sehgal (2009) needs to appear in the References at the end of the essay.
Question 3:
What is the common problem of paragraphs 3 and 4 in the essay?
A: Neither of them have a clear topic sentenceIncorrect: The second body paragraph has a clear topic sentence at the very beginning of the paragraph. The third body paragraph needs to have a clearer topic sentence.
B: Neither of them focuses on the main theme of the essayIncorrect: Both paragraphs address the problem of deforestation and offer arguments against it.
C: Neither of them contain research-based evidenceCorrect: It is essential to develop the arguments in the essay by substantiating them with evidence.
Question 4:
Which of the paragraphs introduces arguments in favour of deforestation?
A: Paragraph 2Incorrect: In this paragraph, the writer argues against deforestation because it harms the ozone layer, and, as a result, leads to global warming.
B: Paragraph 3Incorrect: In this paragraph, the writer argues against deforestation because it might lead to loss of biodiversity.
C: Paragraph 4Correct: At the beginning of this paragraph, the writer briefly introduces the counterargument saying that people need considerable amount of wood for the development of their country.